Tron Sig

http://oi54.tinypic.com/jzywsx.jpg

Thoughts would be appreciated. :)
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Edit: Here's a revision of the original:

http://i54.tinypic.com/34j9bmc.jpg

oversharpened
too dark
colors are too uhh? cant find the word for it
again, oversharpened
even the text is oversharpened wtf

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Originally Posted by Timentia

oversharpened
too dark
colors are too uhh? cant find the word for it
again, oversharpened
even the text is oversharpened wtf

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While this wasn't put in the nicest of ways... He's right. Too contrasty, man. Tone down the sharpening. I can't really tell what that thing is.

Yeah broski, cnc's are suppose to help xD

well i like the grundgy feel to it but its just over sharpened, maybe making the canvas width just a bit smaller would reduce the amount of empty space, there are effects to the
the face that dont look very good

Hmm...you're quite right. I tend to go a bit overboard with saturation on my first drafts of things. It starts to look "normal" to my eye and I can't spot it until someone points it out. Thank you. :)

And I agree about the negative space. I couldn't make up my mind about it. I didn't want to crop it out but I couldn't figure out a way to fill it without being overbearing. I agree that it's best to probably just leave it out.

Revised, hopefully it's somewhat better:

http://i54.tinypic.com/34j9bmc.jpg

definetly gave it alot more depth still not crazy about the text i feel it takes away from the focal point but it looks alot better and good job and making it smaller keep it up nice concept!

The update is much better but you could still probably add some interesting smudging or something.