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focal needs to stand up > add sharp, lightning is weak and I miss there any effects, I can see render 4 more times on bg, do not do it, it does not look good,
work on it man ;)
The tag looks to flat, Sharpen the focal point a bit and blur the background a bit. I like what your trying to do with the simplicity of the tag, but it's not really working here. The text and text placement could use some serious work. You also need to have a decent light source that will go with the natural lighting of the render/stock to make it all pop. I recommend reading a few tutorials.
