Throw Aways :D

SOTW
unfortunately mine can't enter coz of code-issues
1.http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/z...Astroboy-1.png
and this one didn't get any votes /sob
2.http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/z...ures/Moose.png

and this two from the Team Battle vs. Pirates
3.http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/z...es/Andiev2.png
4.http://i815.photobucket.com/albums/z...ures/Scott.png

I definitely need a CnC for all of this 4, I wanna know what my problem is and I gotta improve...
thankies mates

imo
1. has nice lighting and blending
2. seems overtopazed and i don't particularly like the white brush/light on the right hand side and i don't particularly like the border
3.too dark , brighten it up a bit and add a few more effects
4.it has nice effects , i think the lighting could be a bit stronger and it's missing that
wow factor
i hope this helps and isn't too harsh XD

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Originally Posted by ketg

imo
1. has nice lighting and blending
2. seems overtopazed and i don't particularly like the white brush/light on the right hand side and i don't particularly like the border
3.too dark , brighten it up a bit and add a few more effects
4.it has nice effects , i think the lighting could be a bit stronger and it's missing that
wow factor
i hope this helps and isn't too harsh XD

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Yea Thanks Ketg, I don't think it's harsh o.o
I had "harsher" comments than that :D

what could be the Wow Factor? should I add more efx?
and with my 3, I'm pretty content with the effects I want the render to pop out more than the efx but could you give more tips of what efx should I add

Thankies
More CnC please