demon knight?

i think it's from zelda or something, lol.
joey helped a bit :)

http://img543.imageshack.us/img543/389/prophecy10.png

I like it but the text is pretty distracting, and how the c4d stops to sharply around the back of the face.
But the right side looks really empty and there is not much depth, thats something to work on. Good job its a good style, kiu.

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Originally Posted by Elipse

I like it but the text is pretty distracting, and how the c4d stops to sharply around the back of the face.
But the right side looks really empty and there is not much depth, thats something to work on. Good job its a good style, kiu.

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Thanks man.
this is my first time using a C4D, a bit of help from my brother.

i'll try to make my text blend more.
thanks again for the cnc ;).

i would try moving the text more to the right just outside the render and maybe turn the opacity down a bit if your sticking with those colors nice sig really like the background k.i.u.

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I told you not to add text http://i52.tinypic.com/b7xwsn.gif.

The placement is placed a tad more to the right. would be better if adjusted slightly towards the middle imo. love that intro of green. a bit more work on blending and focus techniques. looks decent nonetheless ;)

haha Joey you should disown him as a brother for that :P

na jokes I like this style mate. Like the green effects and feel to it.

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I told you not to add text http://i52.tinypic.com/b7xwsn.gif.

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gtfo.

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Originally Posted by emsee

The placement is placed a tad more to the right. would be better if adjusted slightly towards the middle imo. love that intro of green. a bit more work on blending and focus techniques. looks decent nonetheless ;)

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thanks for the cnc, i will take it into consideration.

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Originally Posted by Slayerplayer

haha Joey you should disown him as a brother for that :P

na jokes I like this style mate. Like the green effects and feel to it.

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thanks josh.

I think this is great. I wouldn't change anything other than maybe work with the font a little bit more. That's about it. Other than that don't change a thing!! Keep them comming, very nice!!