Kratos and FF tags

Kratos v1:
http://i54.tinypic.com/11qtj4x.jpg
Kratos v2:
http://i55.tinypic.com/xmmpfr.png

Final Fantasy:
http://i52.tinypic.com/11t3mec.jpg

PLEASE CNC :)
thank you in advance

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V1 for me :)
Although I think some more effects would be nice, maybe some C4D wrapping him? or coming from behind him?

Good outcome, KIU :]

I wanted to give like a natural feeling to it.Thanks for the comment.:)

Tho overall feel of the kratos sigs is good but nothing really pops-out, use c4ds.

Btw, the smudging is great for me.

thank you.
any comments on the second sig?

Hiya Yakuto !!!

kk your second one has got some good colour and youve got a good idea going, but I got a couple suggestions for you.

You've got 2 diff texts here and they are on either side of your render, that means I now have to look at 2 different things on your sig that will distract me from your focal which is your dude,

Try an put the 2 texts together and much closer to your render ( good place for them in this sig would be his left shoulder or with your focal being closer to the middle and than the text to the right shoulder would be my choice.

It's called the Golden Ration, the eye will not have to be pulled from the focus of your desired image this way and will give your sig smoother flow.

Another point I would suggest is keep your effects in the flow of your focal, in this case your focal is to the left and looking to the left top corner, I would suggest that your effects move in the same motion as the renders eye view, it's more natural looking that way :D and either have the effects moving towards or away form your focal again this will cause my eye to be drawn to your focal ^^

Again welcoem to the void :D I can't wait to see more of your stuff !!