Timeshift

I have tried different tech.. I am satisfied with outcome to 70%.. I still miss there something.. what is it? tell me please :D

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/8026/timeshiftf.jpg

Sweet dude!
I can tell you whats missing, the other 3/4 of the boarder!!! lol
Kill the text to dude, a tag like this needs all the focus on the depth!
Great work, KIU

interesting sig
my first concern is that the c4d behind it isn't blended in well and you should blend that a bit more
i like the bubbles you used on the shoulders
the sig looks a bit mono , try to make the yellow in the sig more dominant
and maybe change the gradient ont he text from black to yellow
the text seems quite distracting
lightign isn't bad
quite nice dude
kiu ~

v2 with edited colors, text (still sux :D, but nvm..) and c4d blended

more c&c?

http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/6600/timeshift2.jpg

dude, that looks siiiiiiiiiiiicck.
i love what you did with it, really made the lighting work out.

my only complaint is the C4D's look a tad low quality.
great stuff bruh.

It's not bad I personally don't like the c4d which was used and there is not much depth or feel for it. Little big I think but I like the colours and glow from the c4d.

i think your lighting is off change yellow to blue and it look better best ive sen u made in a while kiu

I think your blue is fine, but you should throw in some other tones to compliment it.

The yellow from the focal should be recolored purple or something that'll compliment it.
The yellow could work, but it's very dull, washed out and not vibrant enough to look good.

The C4D's are a bit odd.
Otherwise, great piece.
Oh yes, remove the text ;).

Second version is much better, LOVE the yellow accent colors!!! Still feels like it's missing some movement to it though, with as active as the focal is, maybe some pentooling or a smudge or action brushing would really pull it together and make it 10/10 IMO. This is still a great tag though! 8.5/10. Keep it up!!

will left as it is, I already started working on something new..
thanks everybody for tips and comments!