Throw away with battle to Siren

http://img6.imageshack.us/img6/940/beautyintheeyes.png

I felt I had no real aim with this one so I decided to toss, hope I didn't toss the wrong one xD

c&c guys, an be rough ^^ I'm kinda rusty an need the tips.

dam girl lol thats a pretty hot tag :) can't wait to see the tag u keep if this is garbage gj kiu

Can you believe that she is a manga ?:O I think I did a pretty good job enhancing the artists "Realisim"

my lighting is off an I really need advice with this one, I wanted soem on her face, so i like that but the light behind her i don't wish to get rid of , but how do i bring it so it is casting through the little space between shoulder an neck? and how should i have the face ? is it light enough where that back light is coming from ?:S

I tried really hard to get the light going, but meh, fail :P

P.S NO TOPAZ FOR THIS PUPPY!!!

maybe try a light down from that angle or use some paint and lens effects with blend really hott siggy slave!

You could try an outer glow + brush for neck/shoulder? Also, I love this but I hate the colors if that makes sense. This sig rocks but I would like to see an easier transition of yellows and pinks and white. Get rid of the purple and blue and I think it would be a lot better. Also, make less planets, more nebula? I like the planets but I think there are too many of them. This is manga? WOW. Can you post the render? I would love to give this photo a go and see what I can come up with if you don't mind. You are very good. I've been looking at some of your work and you're one of my faves. :) Keep it up!! Love it.

ty guys for the tips an compliments :D

I know what you mean about the nebula, will play with it later an post a v 2

I kinda liked the blue, but yes there is onyl a few spots where it is, i could do with a toss on that.

I rendered only her face cause thats all i needed but here is the stock.

Would have liked to have done a vert on her cause of whats going on in the back, might use her again soon ^^

http://img838.imageshack.us/img838/7717/360854.jpg

why did you throw it!! D:

Thank you thank you!!!