Same tech as last time.. btw yes I know it is monotone..
critics?! cmon hit me hard..
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/4461/section8.jpg
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Same tech as last time.. btw yes I know it is monotone..
critics?! cmon hit me hard..
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/4461/section8.jpg
I kinda like it, I like how the c4d bubbles kinda look like they are moving towards the shoulder/glowing light source I like the lighting on it, a bit different than I normally see but I like it the c4d on the right is just a bit random and sticks out. It's kinda hard to see what the thing is in the Tag, and lacking a bit of depth.
Nice colors and effects. Font is a bit hard to read, doesn't really fit the piece well. I also don't like how the focal is the arm and not the head/face, I think that it could be blended better with some lighting effects on the face/head to really bring that out more. Good composition. The background doesn't really seem to mesh with the render, it goes well with it but it looks like a copy paste job still, so blend it more, play with burn dodge a bit to bring things into focus and make it more of a whole piece?
This is just me but the way the render is it looks like he should be on the left not on the right, I just think that would really help with the flow a lot, but again, that's just me.
I think the font should go from behind his left arm to over his body, give it some added depth. Overall it's good but it's too dark for me. I know a lot of people, and I mean a LOT of people love to have dark pieces that you have to scrutinize to see what the heck is even in the image, but I hate that. I want to look at it and have it capture me because I know what I am seeing not because I can't figure out what it is if that makes sense. Again that's just me.
I think adding some more c4d's and playing with individual color layers would really bring this together. I do like the monotone on this but just a hint of some accent colors or shine on his armor, things like that, would really make a huge difference in my opinion.
Keep up the great work, if you post a 2nd V I would love to see it and CNC it. You have some talent, that's clear to anyone, you just need to refine it.
KIU!!!
this tag was just an experiment.. I want to try some things.. but it is fail.. I imagine it completely different.. thanks both of you :) tzp.. thanks for tips
Imo, I think your blue is too dark and you don't really have any lighter colors/shades going on here :/.
