Spiderman Cover

I don't know if this is Spiderman, but its from a spidy comic cover. What do you think?

http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/3745/spidy.jpg

Smaller and brighter focal (not much brighter... lol)

http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/3745/spidy.jpg

I like it, may by a little too long and at the end of each side it get plain and a bit boring, mayby crop it a bit, I like the lighting and the feel of it. It looks a bit odd in some places were the blurred and sharpened met mayby work on that a bit, No bad thought. To improve I would suggest working on the depth a bit more and flow. GJ.

it's too long looks more like a banner more then a sig and feel it's a bit too daRK on the focal point try lightning that up a bit. I like what you did with the effects kiu