Phoenix

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...hoenixgeni.png

Second Version

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...enixgeni-1.png

i quite like what you did with your smudging, but your foreground fx are really throwing it off and ruining that concept, tbh.

that lens fare doesn't look too appealing and is quite distracting.
you had a really nice thing going on with your background. delete some layers and try use some space stocks set on linear dodge ON THE BACKGROUND.

i think that'll look nicer.
the C4D on the right side is too detailed + sharp compared to the rest of piece, so your quality needs some work as well.

keep it up man :).

Actually my CNC would basically be a copy of the above. Yeah, the c4d on the right is really not blended well and I love the concept, background but it just feels like it's too choppy to me. Hmm..

thanks guys i'll be updating soon just bought my tablet tonight wee!

updated.