anyways, as for the piece. i quite like it, but you should work on your lighting.
the concept of the lighting is nice, but it should be brighter and more appealing.
try adding some more color to the lighting as well, it's basically all white.
the text could go as well.
the effects you've added have a lot of contrast, lower that down a bit.
try filling up your canvas more, work on your lighting + effects and bring out your focal more.
keep it up!
01-08-2011, 05:19 PM
ΩOmega
Just feel like I have to say that the challenge isn't to use the least amount of resources, but to make the make an optimal signature.
01-08-2011, 05:56 PM
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Ilike what you did with what you had.
On a side note..anyone here planing on playing SWTOR?
01-08-2011, 06:09 PM
Genisphere
nice work not crazy about your text placement try not to place text in your render unless it blends in and works well and your lighting does need to be more in depth with this sig k.i.u.
01-10-2011, 12:55 AM
JimNibbles
Thanks for the cnc guys! I added a V2 and V3 to the OP after making some changes (major and minor).
01-10-2011, 11:29 AM
silent_assasin
V3 is brilliant mate!
01-10-2011, 01:10 PM
Genisphere
v3 is sexy love the flow the depth the blend of c4ds and your text looks much better great job.
01-10-2011, 01:13 PM
Colemanisbomb
The text on V3 and V2 is way better than V1 and I love the dimmer background fits better than V2.