http://i1138.photobucket.com/albums/...tia/spidey.png
stop, drop and cnc :]
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http://i1138.photobucket.com/albums/...tia/spidey.png
stop, drop and cnc :]
nice flow the lighting and depth are missing for me though seems way over topazed / lighting effects are too bright i love the smudging just try making the left side of him darker since your light source is coming from his right love the pose you've caught your render in should post this render would like to give it a try your really improving though from some of the work i have seen with you so keep it up your doing great and you'll only get better from here.
derp
heres the render
http://www.planetrenders.net/renders..._display_media
and how is the light source coming from the right o.o
your link didn't work. that's alright and if you clearly look at your sig all the shadow on his face and lower part to his arm is on his left so one would assume that the light source and with the flow of your signature is coming in from his right and the way you've blended his right arm with the smudging makes it look like a light source is on that side and what's with the derp? i was just giving you constructive criticism i was not dis respecting you in any way whatso ever i like your sig just needs some adjustments.