DUB FX

hey guys

I didnt quite knew what I wanted to make but this is how it turned out.I feel like something is missing.I'm not totally satisfied with the outcome.
pleaz ceencee
p.s.: yea... text sucks ass

http://i52.tinypic.com/axcsck.png

i like the idea keep your text white and maybe a lower opacity a bit your light source is way too strong and needs adjustment i like the colors nice job smudging your background keep it up would like to see more from you.

yea,you're right.thanks for your comment. : )

Hmm well, parts of the sig look a bit oversharpened and the render isnt well blended in, the c4d next to the hand looks way different seeing as most of the sig is smudged.
KIU.

thanks :) I'll keep that in mind.

He's too bleached out with no lighting effects to back it up. The c4d really doesn't fit at all IMO, the shape of it seems very out of place and the green shade is a bit odd looking to me. The text isn't really well blended since there isn't much green other than the c4d in the signature. The blending method is good but I think it would look 10x better if you made it a multi layer blend rather than the (what looks like) single layer blending that you did. That way it would really look like he is coming out of the signature while it still keeps a nice flow to it. I do like the light orbs and the placement of them as well. The areas and direction of the lighting makes sense, so that's good as well. The border on this one makes a lot of sense to me, keep that as well. The background fits this piece well, and I like the texture of it.

thank you:) You are right guys,that c4d really looks weird,it just doesn't fit the whole theme of the sig. By the way this sig started out as a c4d style sig but I realized that I suck at it so I went on a different way. :p

I hear you. I suck at c4d myself. :) Not bad though.