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I think just overall it was a bad render to use because it was pretty LQ, parts around the
face look a bit over sharpened, the background is just blue with text? Doesnt really blend or
work with the render. text i would say should just be smaller the clipping mask looks a bit unnecessary also
GJ KIU ♥
I would have to agree about hte render, its lq makes for a wrong set up here, might have been able to pull it off a little more if the images was of better quality.
You did good making the lines an stuff. Done with pen tool ? I would suggest here getting soem flow into your tag as well to give it more pow, if you have a hard time coming up with flow for your render just use a really easy trick, rotate it slightly to the left or right.
In this case your flow should be from bottom left to top right, her arm is giving you this passage ot play with :)
kiu man, happy to see some play with ideas ^^