Another fail (endwar)

So yeah, FAIL!:

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i like the background and the lighting the effects are okay but i know you can do better the smudging on the body is alright but on the face it needs more work or just the way you did it looks odd to me and i can read your text but im not a fan of it k.i.u.

Didnt smudge the face - part of the stock

I like what you did to it, You could burn some areas to create some more depth as well as blur the background a bit, Kiu I like how this turned out :D

like i said on skype i think u need to put this render or stock used in a colder environment looks too warm there too see his breath kiu tho good start

looks nice
sepia colour near the top looks cool
my main complaint is the fractals under the text / on the gun
they are too bold and orange ~ which is weird
nice sig
kiu dude

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