bear attack revised

could i get some CnC please,

original one i did ..
http://i944.photobucket.com/albums/a...ttlecopy-1.png

and 2 slightly revised versions ...

http://i944.photobucket.com/albums/a...ecopy3copy.png
http://i944.photobucket.com/albums/a...attlecopy3.png

I like the 3rd one without text xD looks nicer.

v1 = <3 (for me)