the music within

my first time using the pencil tool :P

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feel a bit lq justin could use some depth i like the effects u was going for in your concept but it's lacking the the colors and smoothness. try bringing back a copy of your focal and erase where u effects are then id try bringing back a bit of those back as well then try a gaussian blur erase the focal . i see potential in this tag keep working at it m8

It's a good start with the pen tool. But a few improvements could be made here.

Try making the pen tooling brighter, that way it pops more.

Sharpen the focal a bit to make it stand out.

Work with your backgrounds a bit more and try to create a natural flow in the tag so everything is going in one sort of motion smoothly.

Also try working with your lighting and such.

nice concept your pentool is shaky can see the lines are all edged out and not straight clean and smooth like they should be and yes make your glow brighter you have that wrapped around your focal so you want to bring more focus on your focal make your background flow one way and add some depth the colors seem to go alright but it's just pretty basic for me and needs a bit more to it k.i.u.

i have rele shakey hands to begin with anyway to smooth that out even with these hands?