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Hey man, so um ... the face is kinda bright, c4d stuff looks nice, and the very left and right look kinda dull. Text is ok, kinda blurry (maybe thats just me). Nice job man KIU! :)
Great blending and effects, depth is good, lighting needs work, background is a little empty, great piece man kiu
Hey, she's pretty ^^ You did good creating chaos and making it still look clean ^^
As said above her face is missing slighty, you could play with your layers a little an see whats doing it, than just a simple adjust image an brightness/contrast or curve it to get back more of that area, or erase the part thats over her face ..
I don't think the bg would be "empty" as is clean an thats always alright as long as it's pulled off well :D , you could go ahead na maybe add some soft bubble c4d or some 1pix dots randomly to give the "Empty area some depth :D thats my opinion anyways ^^
ahh an one more thing I noticed, her braid, either should be blended in more or make it stand out jsut a little more, cause atm it kinda looks very off to the rest of your flow unless you know what it is :)
KIU insane ^^ lookin sexy