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the focal dissapears and doesn't stand out enough... you blended it in to much lol.
colors are to monotone.
text i find to large and also i'd place it near her forhead. read tut's to improve your work.
there are plenty of tuts on this site (also on text)
kiu!!
Difference should be appreciated. It's a pretty different looking style an thats a bonus, though I do feel the focal is lost in the fog, maybe bring back a little more of the face from the blend so we get a more clear vision of this master piece ^^
