sotw

i made this one for sotw
http://img11.imageshack.us/img11/8657/killzone3v5.png
I quite like it ,how can I improve it?
maybe is too simple?

any cnc?

it's great! Very well done. Def. a good chance for getting sotw.

I do think it could use some better typography, though.

Lovin' the flow + effects here but I think you should give it some stronger lighting.

Burn the sides and emphasize the lighting a bit more.
Remove the text.
Kiu!

what about the depht?