http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...tm-d37ynjo.png
v2:
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...tm-d37yoaa.png
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I love V2, the combination of gradient maps you used is great, I don't like the text placement, maybe try a different font and move it up a bit. I like the border with the outline of black then the inside of white, the environment you've placed it in made a lot of sense, the rising sun, the star stock and the C4D on top of its wrong.. Really GREAT.
Nice work, 9/10.
Let me clear some things up :)... there is no Stock Used at all... The Sun and the starts are one c4d... to be honest it was one of the first c4d's i found on google images so i just used it.
Anyway thanks for your comments.
I really like the effects you used near the bird and in general
I prefer v1 bcause the colour of the bird is just better XD
The main problem that I see is that the sun to the left is too distracting because the bird, in my opinion, is too far to the right
So I say work on composition a bit ( not necessarily centred but less off centred )
And trying working on depth a bit
The text isn't bad but I don't particularly like it
Overall it's a nice sig :)
thanks.
any more comments ?
