Typography peice

My first typography peice
got the idea from one of pet's threads 8D
I don't really do Lp's
ummm it's not great
But cnc please :)
http://img225.imageshack.us/img225/8866/quoted.png

it doesnt make sense :/

Makes sense, its deep so you have to think about it for a second.
:D

As for typography, I don't know much, but it looks good to me. Maybe add some more color.

Nice first try, but a few things to pay attention too.

First, make sure your thread has correct spelling. "piece"
Next, you don't want to make the word see, hard to see, it ruins the idea of it, I stead of working with different colours, try using differed styles, like italics for change, and bold for see. Lastly, try dressing up the font a bit, it looks a little bland as is, change up the character spacing and line height to fill the box more.

Nah its really smart, great piece!

(for those who didnt notice, i interpreted it as 'See' was dark difficult to see, and 'Change' was just a different colour.. If i am pointing out the obvious sorry.. lol)
KIU

beat me to it Pet

got to agree with tay, didn't really understand it. But nevertheless i think it's fine, but the "See" should be brighter. Took me a while to see it.

still dont understand it but a great 1st typo non the less i might try one soon

For those that don't understand the quote, it is about affirmative action, sort of like "do unto others, as you would have them do unto you."

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Originally Posted by shiv96

Makes sense, its deep so you have to think about it for a second.
:D

As for typography, I don't know much, but it looks good to me. Maybe add some more color.

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I think I might next time :)

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Originally Posted by Pet

Nice first try, but a few things to pay attention too.

First, make sure your thread has correct spelling. "piece"
Next, you don't want to make the word see, hard to see, it ruins the idea of it, I stead of working with different colours, try using differed styles, like italics for change, and bold for see. Lastly, try dressing up the font a bit, it looks a little bland as is, change up the character spacing and line height to fill the box more.

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didn't notice the word piece XD
Thank you for the cnc I shall think about it if I make a new one :)
Thanks to everyone for the comments :)

Didnt see the see at first, nice quote! I like it, but im not very knowledgable on typography, you need to be able to see see better imo!