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Well its really hard to tell whats going on, i dont know if you have 2 renders or its part of one. or its just an effect you added o__O
The left is too empty/boring.
Text should be closer to the focal/render. Can't really tell where the lighting comes from but i think you got it right?
Tutorials always help your technique and style.
Kiu♥
Ctrl + Z, good sir ;).Quote:
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As for this piece, it's extremely messy. It's lacking proper contrast and a clear focal.
Your contrast here seems really high which isn't really working out too well. Tone it down :p.
Your focal seems to get easily lost, most likely because of the C4D's and the distracting effects placed on the left. Try to define your focal more.
Your composition which is basically the organization of this piece is quite poor as well. The effect placement seems to be scattered over the canvas, where as they should be near the focal or possibly on top of it to avoid distraction.
Keep it up!
anymore :rolleyes:
