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I think you did a good job on the smoke and your colours match the feeling, but might i suggest a few things ?:D
It's always good to have depth, an your on the right track with it here, maybe tho bluring small parts of the doors to give it more effect. Like closer to the ground where the smoke is. 4 focals ( which wouldn't be a bad thing if the last one wasn't so far away that you can't see it so well so it causes you to really focus on it to figure out whats going on)
good stuff brah ^^
Might I also suggest ( if this is a render/stock) that you move that explosion behind your render, or if it's a stock to just cover it up with something a little less distracting, atm it feels liek you have