aramdon(heroes of newerth)

VERY creative, I like the clipping style you did, but I feel the ones close to your render are a tad distracting, maybe try making them move with the flow of your tag, or earasing lightly some parts so you get a more textured look from them.

I think your text is fine but maybe moving it in a little closer, or better yet move your focal towards your text more, so it takes up a little more space in your tag :D

good job ^^ an welcome to the void :D