Iron Spiderman

I don't know what to think of this one. But I told myself that I would post anything I make here so I can get better, so here it is.

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very nice,
like the outcome!
v1 is better but you need to remove the text...

The colors are sex but I'd like to see an outcome in between those two versions. Then it would become flawless. Also drop the text ;)

Looks good to me, I'm diggin' the lighting in this one. The text does take from it a little. I normally make mine white and set it to overlay or leave it on normal(depends), then lower the opacity until you can barely see it.

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Originally Posted by tortue

very nice,
like the outcome!
v1 is better but you need to remove the text...

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Thanks, I'll remove the text or lower the opacity a lot when I get home from class.

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Originally Posted by RadillacVIII

The colors are sex but I'd like to see an outcome in between those two versions. Then it would become flawless. Also drop the text ;)

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0/2 for the text. I'm really missing the mark on this one. Appreciate the rate though, probably one of the best I've had in a really long time. :) I'll post that outcome when I get home.

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Originally Posted by JaySanity

Looks good to me, I'm diggin' the lighting in this one. The text does take from it a little. I normally make mine white and set it to overlay or leave it on normal(depends), then lower the opacity until you can barely see it.

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Yeah, I think I'll do what you said for the text because that makes me 0/3, lol. Thanks for the rate. :)

EDIT: I'm about to post v3.

Any more rates before this signature falls into the deep pit that is 1000+ signature threads?

Drop the text, like Rad said. I prefer V1, the colors don't really appeal to me in the two other versions.
Try to bring in some stronger contrast on the sides and more discrete lighting wherever your main light source is suppose to be.

The faded effect C4D's make it look a bit messy, imo.
Good work, kiu!

Yeah that's what I'm talking about, bottom one for me now = V.3? GJ!

1st ver the best but IMO its still monotonish... anyway KIU!

i really like what you did here got some great depth and use of colors kiu i think v3 is best out of all so far . gj m8