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I laughed when I saw the text placement lol. Hm, I don't really think the colors fit well together, the placement of the effects seem random to me. I think the sumging you did would have looked better if it was flowing up or something. I've seen some better ones from you, so I know you can do better.
Just my opinion though. :]
i don't like what you've done to her outline, looks weird imo.
It has made the whole render look weird :/
Also i don't like how it's BnW with coloured effects, should be all coloured/ all BnW
The text placement, is the best I have see in my life.
It's actually okay but some C4D is irregular like the top right, try dodging around her and burning the edges then add a simple star stock and your good to go.
yes nice text placement:P sry ladies of void when u read this
um i don't like the outline either i think should try smoothing it out .
seems distracting to me .
the c4d needs blending and the smudge needs some work... and sick text placement KIU!
