Tron Collab

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By Cookies & Genisphere c&c appreciated.

Concept is there, but you lack execution and quality. I'd continue with your colors and try added some more C4D's underneath the focal. Your quality is poor in most area's of this piece, a quick sharpen won't hurt ya.

Your lighting seems a bit too forced on and your text should really be removed. It's killing it for me, imo. Especially because of the fact it's completely one color. It's quite boring, tbh.

Continue with this. Try getting in some darker shades there.
Keep it up!

mm sexy... loving the text also.