Fallout

Damn, starting to rust.

http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/2307/pswork58m.png

V2:
http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/2307/pswork58m.png

It looks great. I like how radiant it is. However, the left side is too plain. Perhaps add some text?

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Originally Posted by Fayfie

It looks great. I like how radiant it is. However, the left side is too plain. Perhaps add some text?

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Usually tend to avoid it. Although, I did add text before, I shall upload that version in a second.

Updated. V2 is up.

I definitely looks much better than the last. In the last one the character just seemed out of place.

However, I have found a better solution to the tag. I think you need to find a background with more depth rather than just a solid color.

Though, v2 is good enough.

the added text made it too distracting. >__> maybe crop it starting on the empty side or just add a D text using a badass font will do. :">

v2 is gorgeous. I absolutely love the colors and the text is amazing!

agree with Andoytoys Txt in v2 is very distracting. DR said on one of rians recent pieces that he seemed to just add the text to fill the void and the same applys here. Adding text, no matter how good at it you are, really doesn't compinsate for lack of stuff in that area.

Bright streak right side is very distracting as well. Think you need to work on lighting for this as well. You went for a very glowy look rather than a lighting effect which I get but it doesnt fit this. If you look at the right side of the render it's quite bright, suggesting the light is coming from behind on the right rather than a glow all around. Again i'd say right side blending needs work, looks a little choppy in places and left side looks too dark for an aura like glow.

Just my opinion though :)