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Haha My first sig posted on this forum (:
Im still working on it and need some Advice/Help/Suggestions.
Mainly on Text..(Im no good with Texts..)
Here it is.
http://i1139.photobucket.com/albums/...g?t=1297060884
CnC what i have now plss and Help!
Thanks.
i think that the focal dissapears to much in the c4d's... so you might find a way to bring her more out.. the c4d behind her is straight. the focal is curly.. maybe try a curly c4d to go with the round forms of the focal?? if text doesn't "look" good on a sig then I just leave it out! But normaly rules of thirds and near the focal are the best places for text. :)
I like the dissapearing act kinda tag when playing with c4d whore land !!!
But thats just my taste :P
Might I suggest to give it more pop to lightly erase some of the blur bg to get some more stronger lines in some areas ? I think that would give it a good feel.
I see you put in a light source, I usually don't an get bitched out for that :P but I just wanted to point out a minor detail, the render has her spot light coming from above her face :)
One other idea here, soft black brush on low opactity, lightly colour around the edges an set that to overlay, than play with the fill or opacity, you might actually be able to get rid of the boarder that way if it looks "shade enough" :)
Welcome to the Void, hope you have fun ^^
Welcome to the void :D
