spiderman tag collab with sirenzo & evil mike

http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/5347/spidey3.png
we lost the battle but please cnc :)

This tag would have been nice, but the effects are poorly placed.

Imo there should be more light to the right and less at the left. There are also too many effects in the wrong place, like said above. 7.5/10

where would u have placed the effects and tx for the cnc

IMO I think the effects should be tailing off the back of the woman predominately, but lower the opacity a tad as they are overpowering and im not entirely sure whats happening back there lol, but I think the ones of the arms are good too.
GJ guys, nice collab ^^

thx m8 glad u like it too we did our best :p think we should try again with a render of his choice this time