CnC please :]
http://i802.photobucket.com/albums/y...uPhi/Miku2.png
http://i802.photobucket.com/albums/y...i/hatsunee.png
http://i802.photobucket.com/albums/y...hi/Berserk.png
http://i802.photobucket.com/albums/y...uPhi/Alive.png
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Last one is definitely your best one there. The typography looks really good, and the flow is also awesome. Blending could use some work, especially on that C4D by her hair; try taking a low opacity soft brush to the edges of it.
You use C4D's on linear dodge/screen a lot it seems. If you want to challenge yourself, try keeping them normal and blending them together, or getting them to wrap around your render etc.
Keep up the good work :]