The Swift Scout

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02-11-2011, 04:24 PM
TRUeLM

The Swift Scout

Basically inspired after a (very annoying) match against a teemo player last night. It would also seem that I've had to make quite a few LoL tags ever since I associated myself with the game :/

http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...c7-d39b34c.png

Any CnC is more than welcome.
02-11-2011, 07:19 PM
Aether

Needs less Teemo and more Taric:) I quite like it but the bokeh in front of the focal is a bit intense and the red light (sun coming through the branches?) draws my attention away from the focal. Wich makes him somewhat invisible wich is ironic as... you know, he becomes invisible ingame:)
02-11-2011, 07:41 PM
Derosion

Composition could use some work, the effect placement should be placed in areas that direct attention to the focal. Try not to make them scattered across the canvas.

Lighting could be a bit better as well, try bringing in some contrast to emphasize the lighting some more.
Drop the border, it doesn't suit it here.

Good job, kiu!
02-11-2011, 08:13 PM
TRUeLM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aether

Needs less Teemo and more Taric:) I quite like it but the bokeh in front of the focal is a bit intense and the red light (sun coming through the branches?) draws my attention away from the focal. Wich makes him somewhat invisible wich is ironic as... you know, he becomes invisible ingame:)

No!!! not Taric, xD stuns ftl D:

Yeah, thats what I was trying to get at with the red light, sadly it's apparently distracting. I'll try and tone it down a bit. Thanks!

Quote:

Originally Posted by Derosion

Composition could use some work, the effect placement should be placed in areas that direct attention to the focal. Try not to make them scattered across the canvas.

Lighting could be a bit better as well, try bringing in some contrast to emphasize the lighting some more.
Drop the border, it doesn't suit it here.

Good job, kiu!

D: but I like borders! I'll drop it, see how it looks. Also, I'm not really sure what to say. On my photoshop the lighting is really good, but when I display it here it's just like...a lot brighter than it actually is.

I'll also try to center the effects more so that they draw your attention to the focal.

Thanks for the advice.
02-11-2011, 08:15 PM
Derosion

Quote:

Originally Posted by TRUeLM

D: but I like borders! I'll drop it, see how it looks. Also, I'm not really sure what to say. On my photoshop the lighting is really good, but when I display it here it's just like...a lot brighter than it actually is.

I'll also try to center the effects more so that they draw your attention to the focal.

Thanks for the advice.

Yeah, I understand what you mean. That happens to me all the time and it's because my background color for PS is black. With my type of style my lighting is my main focus in my tags, so the blacks emphasizes all the brighter areas in the piece.

Np ;).