http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee119/ctjjc/bis.png
Tut used: http://www.gfxvoid.com/forums/showthread.php?t=69394
http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee119/ctjjc/shek.png
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The first one would be better if the C4D's were a bit more visible and if the render blended a bit more some of her edges look like they got hit with a high opacity soft eraser brush. Lighting also needs work.
The second one is nice I like the color scheme but I dislike the 4px white stroke that goes around the render. And the C4D at the bottom left is a bit mess and goes against the flow. Clipping mask is pretty good could use some work. Text needs work.
slave is going to like the first one because of her boobs lol
but the hair looks like could of been blended in a bit more near 4d on the left of your tag other then that kiu
Who doesn't like big breasts regardless anime or not?
Keep learning and experimenting :)
