Battle Tag vs KS

http://img404.imageshack.us/img404/3089/voidpirate3.png
I wasn't very satistfied with this...I had no idea what to do at all. In the end I just whored some clipping masks. >_>

So CnC would be appreciated...
This is what I had, and I just sat here staring at it for god knows how long.
http://img841.imageshack.us/img841/5198/wipd.png

Kind of prefer what you had, by a lot actually. I think with a tad bit of lighting in the background it could be an amazing tag imo.
Maybe also add a bit of lighting to her face and clothes since her arm is so bright.

Hmm...I felt like the rest of the tag was too empty, I dunno. I don't usually work with 450x250. >_>
But yeah, definitely could have had more light on her clothes, thanks for that. :]

I think you just need to work on blending your effects with your render/ focal point. Like if you look at her body and look at the effects it's not a smooth transition from effect to body. It's rough and looks to obvious. But overall you did a nice job, keep up the good work.

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Originally Posted by Hoshiko

Hmm...I felt like the rest of the tag was too empty, I dunno. I don't usually work with 450x250. >_>
But yeah, definitely could have had more light on her clothes, thanks for that. :]

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My pleasure, the first is just too chaotic, too bright imo.
Sometimes emptiness is alright, it can add atmosphere which is something I personally enjoy in tags and I think it does here.
Maybe you could just accentuate the lighting in the background a bit to match the effects in the foreground, I wouldn't say as strong, but it wouldn't look as empty and would give the tag a sense of cohesion.

was a vn tag indeed hosh i feel u been improving great deal kiu nice job