chinese woman

http://i1138.photobucket.com/albums/...entia/time.png
http://i1138.photobucket.com/albums/...pazremoved.png
cnc please

To much black space, to much topaz. remove the text and tone down the topaz and try to fill that black space

its a painting its not so much topaz
and theres hardly any black space..

black space is fine , still flows with the tag well, it juts that the topaz is not really helpful if u want to improve with ur sig and photoshop skills manually since topaz seems to increase ur tag by 200% in visual impression XD. So try without any "filters" that enhance dramatically and focus only on filters that are provided in photoshop. You'll improve way more, trust me =D. Tag is nice btw.

if its a painting, remove the topaz, the natural looks its better!

I don't think there's too much black/empty space, the entire tag doesn't have to be filled with shite mate.
I do agree about removing text though and it is tad over topazzed (can see it in the clothes).

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Originally Posted by Gallagher

I don't think there's too much black/empty space, the entire tag doesn't have to be filled with shite mate.
I do agree about removing text though and it is tad over topazzed (can see it in the clothes).

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ite ill remov the text and try to get rid of some of the topaz

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Originally Posted by Shadowvector

black space is fine , still flows with the tag well, it juts that the topaz is not really helpful if u want to improve with ur sig and photoshop skills manually since topaz seems to increase ur tag by 200% in visual impression XD. So try without any "filters" that enhance dramatically and focus only on filters that are provided in photoshop. You'll improve way more, trust me =D. Tag is nice btw.

if its a painting, remove the topaz, the natural looks its better!

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If I focused on using topaz, Id improve at topaz thus still making me improve but thanks

Indeed painting doesnt need topaz :)
and i just dont like black space personal opinion.
i tihnk if u remove the topaz and leave the text away, that u have a good tag

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Originally Posted by Timentia

ite ill remov the text and try to get rid of some of the topaz

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You don't have to remove the text if you don't want to, to me it's just a really dull green in comparison to the rest of the tag, maybe even just brighten it up or something.

removed most of the topaz theres like no difference lol
http://i1138.photobucket.com/albums/...pazremoved.png

ow one of ur best :3 i think it looks great just a bit over topaz sharpen ur focal.also looks good w/o text good job time!