soldier

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treid something new
i think it works

the effects seem a little messy around him imo its good to try new things though. keep going!

There's very little blending and the effects seem poor. It just seems like a bunch of C4D's mashed together, try lining up your effects and cleaning them up for better composition.

Kiu!

Effects are underdone, Don't be afraid to keep the layer style on normal

well they have a black bg so i have to put them on screen

I don't like it.
The effects are to messy.. It goes in all directions.

Im sure if you keep messin with the same style it will start to look better. looks a lil messy now tho. kiu