Forbidden Paradise

http://radikal.ua/data/upload/ba193/...6cbc3ef7b4.png

v2:
http://radikal.ua/data/upload/04012/...dea9895acd.png
:D What do you say about this

would look better if the canvas was smaller imo kiu and not so bright

We got diffrent opinions but thx for CnC

v2 is much better imo gj :)

v1 i get rid of the text imo.

topaz is what i say bout it

I just like it. good flow created with the lines. effects fit nice, as do the colors.
Only thing is the text, it looks verry slapped on. did you shade them?
you might clip an A.I. on the text and then enlarge it so that the focal goes over the text, to blend it in..

other then that nice work mr Bear!!

You wouldnt mind making a tut on your style?