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Constructive comments?

Like this one but the colors aren't too great, the flow is good by the sig being tipped to the left it adds a bit of depth. Cool effect around him also, some effects need to be cleaned up / sharpened.

Still a good sig :) !

Thank you, later I'll try to do that ;)

Colors, brightness and focal is a issue. Fix the colors and do some oldschool sharp and blur.

Effects are good. Blending the render is required.
Reduce the bright line on the left coz it doesnt complement with the lighting