Thanks Slave for the render :D
cnc guys, still tryin... fuckin empty >_<
http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/9...giftnotext.png
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Thanks Slave for the render :D
cnc guys, still tryin... fuckin empty >_<
http://img545.imageshack.us/img545/9...giftnotext.png
Eh, I like it. The colors are a bit off from each other, but that's alright..your focal stands out a lot and it's blended well with the firey effect. Some parts look kinda LQ though.
Smudge is nice, flow is nice, depth could use work the lighting too. If you look at where most of the lighting is, it is to the left of the focal.. but then the focal's left side is dark not bright. So I would say darken that and then you always have a bit of that light to the right of the focal to explain the lighting on the right side of the render. The bg looks a bit lq, idk if that was the outcome of the blur that you may have put on it or not. Not to bad of a smudge, keep it up.
Nice use of the smudge to add to the flow.
gave u my cnc on the other site :P
I really gotta try this smudge style out soem time, I just hate to smudge >.< gj ish, very flattering ^^
Wait a second, the area at the bottom right, the pattern goes against the flow D:
I like it but im a sucker for smudge work. Flow is nice but depth and lighting could use some work. Kiu though, smudge work looks great when its perfected ;P
Thanks for the feedback guys :D