Lol, my own design kinda gives me the creeps when I look at it! It reminds me of when I played through the game "Metro 2033," which is such a creepy game! The render is from Metro 2033, by the way.
Your lighting makes no sense .... it seems to have a strong light beaming on it but it has no strong light source ...
Given what the actual text says, it should probably be black.
Lot's of empty space, and the fact that the render looks hued is bad.
I don't like the square parts.
No depth.