http://www.ximg.co.uk/images/1zh0r7ha6fkxyes0axp3.png
Printable View
I would suggest erasing the effects off of the render, so it shows her off more. There's no depth to the design either; try layering your effects to give it a feeling of depth. You should also work on the background, because the model looks like she's floating in midair. :/ Your lighting needs work too.
It's a good start though. Keep it up, man!
Bump
Do not Bump old threads.
[Locked]
