A House Fire

My focus on this one was blending as that seemed to be the issue brought up the most in my recent works.

http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/.../Housefire.png

SeeEnSee, I appreciate every comment made.

Work on depth, lighting, take out the text, blend your focal a bit more in to the whole color scheme... looks discolored and a bit lq. Flow is not bad, effects are nice. Not too bad mang, keep at it.

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Originally Posted by tits

Work on depth, lighting, take out the text, blend your focal a bit more in to the whole color scheme... looks discolored and a bit lq. Flow is not bad, effects are nice. Not too bad mang, keep at it.

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Thanks, any specific tips on improving the depth?

EDIT:
(V2)
http://i1103.photobucket.com/albums/...ousefireV2.png
I only used text on V1 because I rarely do so I need to improve on it.
Is this a bit better?

For depth, you can... blur the bg or outsides, burn the bg or outsides, make sure the focal stands out/ sharp and noticeable... but not lq or discolored.

I agree with all he said especially the color. Seems really washed out, other then that... Good job man kiu

LQ but I like some of the effects, they work well in their placement.
Anyways, the effects seem more sharpened then the render. Seems strange.