Venom-Sig

I had seen so many venom tags here in void so i planned to make one
and this is the result
v1
http://i51.tinypic.com/5zlav6.jpg
v2
http://i55.tinypic.com/ht72j8.jpg

w/c one is better?

lighting looks good. gj

tnx ej...

updated with v2 darken some areas of the sig

there is a lot happening in the tag. Its good but the render needs to be more prominent. Effects are eye catching
good job though
kiu m8

Soft brush at the top ruins your lighting.

so should i remove it or make it better?