For LP portion. I'm basically a noob when it comes to LP. I was hoping I could get some CNC on these and if you guys can tell me which is better, that would be very appreciated.
03-25-2011, 07:30 PM
oNo
really like the first one.
the effects are really one sided only complaint
love the color, feel and everything. Just the one sided effect thing.
kiu
PS.
gimme render pl0x?
And yeah, I was aiming for that kind of effect actually.
03-25-2011, 08:56 PM
edwinpabito
love the 1st one...but there is something wrong with the flow on the effects, just fix that thing and it will be super awesome
03-25-2011, 09:08 PM
Slave
wow razer good stuff :D as said above, love the first one ^^ I would do soemthing more with the wings tho, be subtle about it tho, don't over to it ^^
03-25-2011, 09:44 PM
wrftw
I don't get it. You killed the depth by overblurring the wings. Changed the peacufull green color scheme to aggressive red with a default gmap. Overpowerred the cropped left and made right ultra empty. I mean most of the above won't do you good.
Lps are different than sigs. You have a lot of space to fill. Everything must be in a complete harmony. You gotta think what you want to do first. Then you gotta find your color scheme which shows your idea best. Then gotta add your elements little by little. Always checking your ligthing and depth. That's why lp takes far more than sigs and people do them rarely.
Just think realistic mate. And think before makin it. It isn't that hard. Good luck.
03-25-2011, 10:25 PM
cC.ZaMa
Thanks for the cnc guys, :D. I'll fix it later and see how it turns out.
03-25-2011, 11:29 PM
Slave
I agree with soem of the stuff that ftw is saying, I jsut would have said it nicer:P I don't agree all the time though with you gatta know what your doing than do it, because soemtimes I just open it up an start popin random stuff in to see if it goes.
I do agree with lp are ment to have more going on than just the focal, go ahead an get creative and play with your canvas, find qualities in the bg that can improve your foreground like falling leaves or fog or falling wing feathers, doesn't have to be crazy, just angelic ^^ i think the blured up wings isn't bad, but you have lots some depth in the bg, try only bluring some of the spots and leaving others safe ^^