Boo!

Something I wrote for a project in class a few years back. Had to be serious with an "aftertaste of humor" (not my words lol) and short obv. Sorry for the stupid title, this never had one xD


Let your thoughts flow,
Don't be afraid to show,
Show your feelings and thoughts below,
Below that thick skull of yours,
Where the brain roars.
The brain.
It contains all the words I've just written down,
But now...
Now.. I have no more words to write down,
So..
I will end this with a frown.

: (

...

it's a double fail. i haven't noticed any serious nor humor at it lol

you should title this one brain fart. lol no I like it tho it is simple and to the point. doesn't mess around. Keep em comin try writing something about your current life.

I'm a person who likes to find humour in anything so it may be just me but I sort of chuckled at the ending. Nice rhythym though the ending feels a bit abrupt. Keeping writing stuff!