http://www.cue.co.il/i/cue-57d7506247.jpg
V2
http://www.cue.co.il/i/cue-0k8mocubB5.jpg
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Pretty cool , i like the effects,try burning/darkening the left side of the tag to help the lighting a bit, kiu
This is a decent tag :) I think your main priority now is bringing out the focal more. But the effects are nice and the lighting works quite well. Overall, i think it could do with improvements but it's got potential. kiu!
ive added another version
Well I'd say it's an improvement. But now the border kills it. Try to blur the everywhere but the focal. That should do the trick.
v2 for me just thinking that its oversharpened you can easily notice that because of the text....and try removing the border....btw make it cleaner nxt time GJ though KIU