TYT Round 3 Try Numero Tres

http://i902.photobucket.com/albums/a...lefocal2v1.png

=3 I guess I might use smudge a bit more, I like it here. cnc please?

I think you are overthinking the theme here, instead of just having two renders slapped in there try having one render and a distant focal in the bg or one part of the render be a close focal in the foreground to add depth and give the piece some creative atmosphere. Using sharpen, blur, gaussian blur, pentool, brushing, gradient maps, displacement maps, etc. there is a lot you can do besides just having two renders back to back in a sig for a double focal sig. This sig tho Idk about because I like that you matched colors of both focals but they are too far apart imo, its like you tried to fill all the possible space you could with stuff and it just looks thrown together without a plan. Keep goin man.

hey bro i like how u try so hard at this tourney and it shows u care so much to improve keep working on your focal bro make sure it fits well with the other and on your bg . u want the bg to fit as well or everything will be out of whack imo . kiu bro

Thanks for the tips Domino, ^^. Thanks Sirenzo :D. I tried to actually make it look like the blue girl was coming out of the headphones but I guess it didn't work.