Superman

http://img196.echo.cx/img196/7492/superman1copy9gl.png

Just made this a few hours ago, what ya think? <_<

Crit please. ;)

IMO because it is a cartoon character maybe you could have put in a cartoon colored background instead of an abstract bg....anyways the text is too dark and there something covering supermans head...your multicolouring needs a little work thou...but still nice job

Thanks for the advice, will work on that in the morning. :)

Render seems over blended.

like it was said the colours are to dark for a cartoon render, maybe change them around and multi-colour.

Thanks for the crit guys, advice taken, will post the improved version in a few minutes. :)

Made all changes, except cartoon bg as i would have had to make sig again, but advice taken though and will do next time i make a sig with a cartoon stock :)

http://i4.photobucket.com/albums/y10...erman1copy.png

looks a littlw better&#33; gj

I like the update you made. The render blending is done pretty well, I don&#39;t think it&#39;s over blended at all. I like the little motion blur you have over Superman, it&#39;s really well placed eye-candy. The only other things I would improve would be maybe not using as many colours in the background (i mean it looks fine, but there&#39;s just a little too much) and maybe work on the text, like the position. It&#39;s kinda just floating randomly there.

Thanks guys, text is a weakness i think its about i read a tut on text skills, xD. :)

Maybe i should start using downloaded brushes as well. <_<