Experiment Tag

Okay, i made this to try some stuff that i have been seeing in a lot of tags lately, i think it turned out pretty good, CnC please.
http://i948.photobucket.com/albums/a...ts/HaloC4d.png
V2
http://i948.photobucket.com/albums/a...s/HaloC4d2.png

i think just a biiiiit more lightning wouldn't harm the sig

so you want me to add some more of the blue circles? where would be a good spot for another.

maybe a big one on the top o.o but make it smoooooooooth like sex

Haha, okay :D

V2 Added

Wow man, showing some great improvment.
Colors just seem a bit washed out but the quality is great, depth is okay but find a better way to create depth without just blurring the Background.
Keep it up man

wow definitely one of the better ones I've seen from you.
IMO you overblurred the background. As said there are other ways of creating depth rather than just blurring.
I like v1 better. The second one has too much lighting IMO.
KIU

Looks wicked. I agree with the cnc given from before. Really like the whole feel of the tag.

Thanks everybody, but how would you suggest making depth?